Some synths didn't really fit in that well, for example the bass starting at 0:30. I think that it should be more low-end, and have a bit more punch to it. The brass starting at 1:24 also sounds kinda low quality. Some snare choices were also a bit odd to my ear considering rest of the track.
Those sliced vocals were an awesome touch though ^^! They fit really well with the other instruments, especially the acid-ish synth.
Structure-wise it is solid. Some transitions were quite minimalistic, but dont take away from the listening experience.
Maybe the biggest change i would personally have made would've been adding pad there, but i put pad literally everywhere, and its more of a stylistic choice anyways.
for some reason i found your track quite difficult to review. Well i did my best to roast ya.